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  1. Add start date and expiry date in Leave Management
  2. Send email to user email/organization (group email) in Announcement
  3. Add a group email address in Organization
  4. Add a one-click approve/reject link in the email to approve/reject the leave application.
  5. Show leave details information, such as entitled, taken, and balance, when staff fills the leave application form.




Attached is the issue we need to discuss before the M18 launch.


To make sure we understand how to implement them in M18. And raise the problem we have in the old MAC system.


We can have a meeting next week if you both are available. Thanks.


The MAC system support maintenance will be expired on 30 Sep 2021.


Our Hong Kong IT department head suggested not continuing the maintenance since the new M18 ERP system will launch soon.


Please review the maintenance situation. Thanks.



I recommend continuing the maintenance to protect the company's valuable data in the past years.


I have a day off on 2021-08-31


Attached is the guide for how to share notebook/mobile to the television in room A.


We are developing the company intranet. Would you please provide the following information for the initial setup?


  1. AVC and eGoGo staff position in Hong Kong.
  2. The annual leave calculation method for AVC and eGoGo in Hong Kong.



Any reason why the server is very active (CPU 30%) all the time even at 3:00 am - 6:00 am? It seems very strange. Is it that possible the bitnami causing the CPU utilization increment.



The Microsoft 365 Business Basic (商業基本版) is the proper solution for sharing the document with Xtep. (see attachment)


I have few questions about the quotation

  • Will you charge us for that amount in the quotation?
  • Want to clarify



  • Is the quotation once for all domains, egogohub.com, whizoomedia.com, 830lab.com, heshekids.com ?



Microsoft Team comes with SharePoint which has 1TB storage for HK$39 / user/month.


Kevin, Herra, Jenny will be the members who have the following right:

- Create teams and channels

- Add and invite people to the team

- Store files in the channels


IT could assist to create and set up teams/channels and invite people.


The authorized staff from Xtep will be the guest who can store files in the channels.


Only requires 1 Microsoft 365 Business Basic license to accomplish the task.



Thanks and Regards,


Season


I think the desktop is good enough for general staff unless they need to do field service.


this conflicts with b


The software you may interest in.


Check the availability of the email address.


Delete the email address after 14 days of the last date.



There are seven staves.


I can implement the logic in your excel file. It seems can apply the rules above to fit the cases except


Maybe visible should not affect certain users. Visible should only apply to other users. If a certain user is set to the Stage, it should be always visible to that user. Right? Maybe we can just simply it.


  1. So if there is no certain user in the list, visible and enabled apply to all users (easy understand)
  2. If there is a certain user in the list, it must be visible to that user and not enabled to other users.


Is it better understood and fit the needs?



For point 5:

Maybe visible should not affect certain users. Visible should only apply to other users. If a certain user is set to the Stage, it should be always visible to that user. Right?


  1. So if there is no certain user in the list, visible and enabled apply to all users (easy understand)
  2. If there is a certain user in the list, it must be visible to that user and not enabled to other users.


Is that simple rule will be better understood?


I mean visible and enabled if all stage’s enabled/visible (default setting). This is for the user to set up the layout conveniently. Otherwise, the user need to change all component’s stage enabled/visible to on.


The following is the filter criteria that will be implemented:


If there is empty (no emails or roles) in theStages”, the stage enabled/visible applies to all login users.


If there are not empty (has emails or roles) in theStages”, the component will only be enabled/visible to the login user email and role in theStages”. The component will always be invisible to other login users (email and role) that is not in theStages”.


If component’s stage enabled/visible both are not set (both gray out), the component always is enabled and visible to all login users.


For the first time data input, all components are enabled and visible. Because assume the stage is 0.


This can be problematic coz fields supposed to be only editable in stage 2 or later stage can then be editable at initial stage. This is a bit counter-intuitive.


Does the filter criteria correct and ok?


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